When She Woke

Published in 2011, When She Woke is a young adult novel in the dystopian sci-fi genre. Author Hillary Jordan bases her work on a futuristic update of a classic novel – Nathaniel Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter. She also brings in elements from another well-known work in this genre – Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale. Critics worry that although the story Jordan creates has flashes of original and inspired ideas, by combining these two much-admired works, the author finds it hard to find her own voice under the weight of previous masters. Still, some reviewers praise the work: “Jordan’s passionate and vivid writing” and its “unflinching imagining of a bleak future.”

The setting is a horrible future Texas. There, after a sterility-inducing, sexually-transmitted epidemic ravages the world’s childbearing women, a fundamentalist Christian theocracy has assumed power (a setting very similar to Atwood’s). Roe v. Wade is overturned and abortion is now considered murder. However, the punishment for having an abortion – and the punishment for all crimes in general – is no longer incarceration. Since prisons are too expensive and recidivism rates are too high to bother keeping people locked up, convicted criminals now undergo “melachroming,” a procedure where their skin is dyed a color that announces their crime for the period of their sentence. For abortion (and murder in general), the color is red (which lines up with the scarlet letter “A” for adultery that Hawthorne’s heroine has to wear pinned to her clothes). “Chromes” are released back into the world to be shunned, abused, and often hunted.

Our protagonist is Hannah Payne (her name is a reworking of Hawthorne’s Hester Prynne). Hannah, a twenty-six-year-old woman, belongs to a Christian mega-church and firmly believes in its teachings. However, when the church hunk—married Reverend Aidan Dale (namechecking Hawthorne’s Arthur Dimmesdale)—comforts her family after a terrorist attack, he and Hannah have an affair that leads to her pregnancy. Wanting to protect Arthur’s reputation, Hannah gets an illegal abortion and is arrested. Refusing to divulge the name of the doctor who performed the procedure or the man she slept with, she is convicted of murder. Her sentence is sixteen years as a red chrome.



After a month in an isolation cell where she can be watched twenty-four hours a day like a reality TV show, Hannah spends time in the Straight Path Center, a rehabilitation center where she is forced to care for a doll like it’s her baby. She meets Kayla, who shot her father to protect her sister from being molested. The rehab’s staff is deeply abusive, but it offers chromes relative safety when compared to the outside world. Still, Kayla and Hannah leave as quickly as they can and go their separate ways.

Hannah’s sister is sympathetic to her plight, but her husband is a member of the Fist, a paramilitary chrome-hunting group. Since the women of this society are unable to make any decisions and must always defer to the men to whom they belong, Hannah’s sister can’t offer her shelter.

Hannah uses a chrome tracking implant to reconnect with Kayla and the pair set off to find a potential place to stay – Kayla’s cousin’s house. On the way, they are menaced by the Fist and are saved by Simone and Paul, who are members of the Novembrist feminist pro-choice resistance movement. At first, the Novembrists balk at helping Kayla, whose crime has nothing to do with abortion. Soon, however, Hannah and Kayla are making their way along a kind of Underground Railroad that should get them to Canada, where abortion is still legal, and where the chroming can be reversed.



The journey is perilous, with many moments of near-capture, near-rape, near-sex-slavery, and betrayal from seemingly kind helpers. Saved from one such danger by Simone, Hannah realizes that she may be bisexual and rethinks her church’s unyielding hatred of the LGBTQ community. She initiates a sexual encounter with the lesbian Simone. Simone supplies Hannah with a van and a gun, and Hannah promises to head directly for the border without having to get help from anyone else ever again.

But before getting to Canada, Hannah takes a detour to meet with Aidan at a secluded cabin. They have sex, and a tearfully guilty Aidan says that he will confess everything about being Hannah’s lover. Selflessly, Hannah tells him to reconsider – after all, no matter what happens, they can never actually be a couple without being the targets of the Fist. They say their goodbyes and Hannah travels northward. Soon, she learns on the news that Aidan died of a heart attack after partly confessing, telling the congregation about his adultery but not naming Hannah.

The novel ends as Hannah crosses into Quebec, reconnecting once again with Kayla, who has also managed to make it there.